I left you on a star (rhyme in meter)
I left you on a star This night is calm I'm world away skyward rising leaving this clay. This earthly lot where I exist shall be no more tonight! It's in the clouds and dreamy mist my soul does long...
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This is so lovely, completely enchanting.....it read like a slow dance...tender and soft....I adored this......Poe
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Oh My ! This is just lovely ! I think the heart of this poem for me is in these 3 lines: Quote:You see, my dear, our window frame has opened musingly to scenes seen heavenly...Thank you for allowing a...
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Ah. . .I must say when I saw "rhyme" I said to myself. . .uh-oh! And almost didn't read it. But now I'm glad I did.
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. It is tough to share rhyme anymore it seems because some think it's outdated, and old art. To me it is music, a rhythm to get lost in, where imagination...
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A truly wonderful write Willow, and well deserving of the honor accorded it... Brian...OUT ON THR ROAD, OUT 'NEATH THE STARS, FEELIN' THE BREEZE, PASSIN' THE CARS.
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Well-earned bragging rights to you and your write, Willow! I simply enjoyed this ethereal journey which managed to take my heart and mind to highest heights and land me in a bed of love, warmth and...
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Thanks SPD, scorp amd PR. I truely appreciate your time in reading!"Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the universe of desire within"
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